Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 3) Poem by Theany Ouy

Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 3)

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Retaliation has commenced
This battle I will prevail,
A mission I must complete
To accomplish not to fail.
No mercy, no sorrows...
No more tears,
Creatures of mortalities
Cannot be feared.
My heart perceived insightfully
But will overcome the pains,
The soldier in myself marched
For the honors I have gained.
I've learned to separate
My heart from my mind,
Destroyed and take over
All that made us blind.
Courageous as I am,
I stand as a warrior...
Victory in my hands,
Therefore, I am a true survivor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ebi Robert 29 October 2011

nicely done.......i like the pattern.

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Ebi Robert 29 October 2011

nicely done.......i like the pattern.

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Dave Walker 30 October 2011

All three poems was very very good. I enjoyed reading them.

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Kamel kamel 30 October 2011

You are not just a survivor but the winner of this battle... coz you got over your sorrows; when you've learned to separate your heart from your mindand that's your powerful weapon

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Sonali Sings 31 October 2011

Love though brings with it misery and pain, should not be allowed to become weakness but instead make it your strength to win the battle of life and come out as a warrior. An inspirational poem. Victory for the poet, no doubt! ! !

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Stan Petrovich 07 December 2011

I was disappointer in thid unltimate Chapter.The final fived lines border on cliche.

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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Clarence Prince 07 November 2011

'The soldier in myself marched' That's very braved, a lovely job!

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John Raubenheimer 06 November 2011

'The soldier in myself marched/for the honours I have gained.... ' pointing the way onward to victory, discipline of thought.

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Tasha Scott 05 November 2011

are you in the army or something like that? you sound like a true warrior! ! ! ! this is beautiful! ! ! i love it! ! ! !

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