Bloody Needles Poem by Kevin Fisher

Bloody Needles

Rating: 3.7


I told myself it would be just one prick
Sticking it in felt so good
I took out the needle
Only for a second
In and out the blood was flowing quickly
Stuck it in faster and faster
I lost control
I'm no longer thinking
All this pain without even drinking
More and more needles lodged into my skin
Can't remember where the first hole begins
My mind and soul is screaming
I finally ripped out all the needles
Felt pain
Yet only slightly
Looked into the mirrior
Can't believe who I'm seeing
Looked to the floor
All that I see
A dark reflection of me
And a large pile
Of my bloody needles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Tamayo 26 February 2009

I like this poem, it's raw thoughts and feelings nailed in poetry format.

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Erika Wingo 08 October 2012

This poem is filled with raw honesty and emotion. I feel the pain of your struggle and I can relate.

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Angelic Warrior 17 June 2009

in my mind there are three possibilities for what this really is.....your version of cutting...cept using needles......your a druggie......or metaphorically.....you just keep hurting yourself......well done all the same 10 :)

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Lady Black Rose 05 June 2009

kiza... good as always! ! !

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Christine Kerr 29 March 2009

Hey Kevin Fisher, That's the name of the nutty smart guy on the Y&R. Like your style, you may not like the truth but here it is anyways, 10+++ for showing what the world is all about.

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Sandy Vanity 28 February 2009

i love this poem its so kool i like how you worded it. this poem is a 10

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