Blow Me Away X Poem by Magic What'sHerName

Blow Me Away X

Rating: 5.0


Blow me away
Forget yesterday
What happened doesn’t matter
Don’t let my heart shatter!
Keep it safe for me
Don’t break it apart just to see
If it will break
It is more than I can take
I love you with my whole heart
Don’t rip me apart

Take care of my heart for me
Don’t take any chances please
Do not threaten to leave
It is more than I can bare
Don’t say you do not care
Because I know you do
Your just too scared to be you

Don’t run away
Bring me back today
What happens, happens for a reason
Don’t charge me of treason
Keep this heart safe for me
Don’t test me so you can see
That I will break
I don’t know how much of this I can take
I love you with everything in me
Don’t rip me apart please!

*(For a boy who doesn't care if I fall apart, If given the chance he would rip out my heart) *

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazz Annis 24 June 2009

this was a very well written piece really enjoyed it!

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Alex Lewis 24 June 2009

I vote 10 a lot and do not mean it-I just want to please the poet. THIS IS NOT THE CASE! I love this poem. It is just sooooo good. I love, mostly, how you are asking the reader to keep your heart safe. You have a way with extended metaphors! 10++++++

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