^^^^blue Love^^^^^ Poem by Marieta Maglas

^^^^blue Love^^^^^

Rating: 3.7


Give me your love,
When the blue rain is pouring down.
Just open the window of Heaven for me.
I can hear the rain whispering your name.
I can hear the whispers of the white tree,
And I can wait for my falling rainbow.
Just give me your blue love.
I understand that you are mine.
Now, when I have you, I'm alive.
I stay near you, touching you
And I want to stay this way forever.
Just ask me to stay
And I will never leave.
This could be for eternity.
Just ask me to stay
Again and again,
Just give me your love
Again and again,
Just wait for the blue whispering rain
Again and again,
And let me wait my rainbow
Again and again,
Again and again,
Again and again,
Again and again,
Again and again.

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved

Friday, April 9, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 11 April 2010

Nice title. Initial five lines of this poem are really crafted well. Repetition too is good. Again and again you come with good theme.

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Eyan Desir 15 April 2010

Blue love? I thought the word blue means pain>? Its a good write but why the name blue love why not red love?

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2016

Give me your love, When the blue rain is pouring down. Just open the window of Heaven for me. I can hear the rain whispering your name. Exquisite.

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Sandra Fowler 22 April 2010

In my mind, love has always been blue and the rain only adds to the drama. Beautiful write. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Ying Escalona 19 April 2010

Please stay Mayette :)

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very nice.. love the way you wrote it. Best wishes to you :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 April 2010

Blue and blued …off beat love [blue] may be signifying blue sky expressing vastness… Thanks sharing… Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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