Blue Moon Poem by Dustin Bennefield

Blue Moon

Rating: 4.3


Blossoming from the rock
A soul of a desperate lock
Becomes one with the blue moon

Hues of blue and gray
A due of death today
A blue moon rises in the west

It seemed so long ago
When the moon was so-so
And never went to the side of the blue

Now life is happening
And flowers are dying
The moon so blue is in the middle of the night sky

A love is a death
With a beginning and end
Just like the blue moon

With the beginning of a new day
The moon is hidden
And a new life is born
Unlike the moon of blue

Copyright 2006 Dustin Bennefield

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dawn Fuzan 13 May 2014

Dustin This is a good poem, keep it up

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RyuOh Kenshin 30 June 2007

They way you wrote it is so interesting and it had a unique flow to it and I love how you gave the moon interersting characteristics. Two thumps up. - Ryu-Ohki

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Leigh A. Hill 16 June 2006

hey, this is a neat poem. its one that only a few, maybe only you can understand. i can almost grasp the concept behind it! its a neat poem! dont listen to the guy below me who commented. he doesnt know what hes talking about. love always, starr

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