Dustin Bennefield

Rookie (Semptember 11,1991 / GA)

Blue Moon - Poem by Dustin Bennefield

Blossoming from the rock
A soul of a desperate lock
Becomes one with the blue moon
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Comments about Blue Moon by Dustin Bennefield

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dawn Fuzan (5/13/2014 5:38:00 PM)

    Dustin This is a good poem, keep it up (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie RyuOh Kenshin (6/30/2007 6:17:00 PM)

    They way you wrote it is so interesting and it had a unique flow to it and I love how you gave the moon interersting characteristics. Two thumps up.

    - Ryu-Ohki (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Tyler (7/19/2006 4:18:00 PM)

    What a great poem, a sparse landscape, bleak and unforgiving, I love the rhyming pattern, how original. Ignore that De Faoite, he's one of those so and sos who thinks free verse is the be-all and end all which it isn't. Go ahead with your style, because I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leigh A. Hill (6/16/2006 7:39:00 PM)

    hey, this is a neat poem. its one that only a few, maybe only you can understand.
    i can almost grasp the concept behind it!
    its a neat poem! dont listen to the guy below me who commented. he doesnt know what hes talking about.
    love always,
    starr (Report) Reply

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