Blue Notes Poem by James Mills

Blue Notes

Rating: 5.0


Bar-room murmurs a dripping beat,
loud with sounding brass
and heavy metal thunder.

Lightening up in perfumed clouds
of illicit smoke
we badmouth in street talk
this lifeless life.

Poor art. Poor you. Poor me.
Pour me. Pour over me
in liquid waves
falling scales of
blue, blue notes.

Time runs
at thirty three and a third,
scratching out our dusty soundtrack.

Fading into terrific
silence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tailor Bell 10 October 2006

what a great atmosphere you spin here...can just hear the music. -Tailor

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Frances Macaulay Forde 02 June 2005

Can't fault this Jimmy. Great stuff. So evocative and in the tone of blues...

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