Blue Ocean Poem by Preitty Nayarr

Blue Ocean

Rating: 4.5


Life is so uncertain,
uncertain as we can see
The one wid us not stays always we foresee
We tend to pretend what we feel
And close the doors our mouth we seal!
Definite is nothing, nothing comes our way Oceans remain blue, feelings remain blue..that's all we slay!

Light is low, lower is our patience we say
We say 'what' we want too, not realizing underlying harms to the relationships
We don't care enough for the one we used to love once, we change ~our world change cause of hardships!
BUT Oceans remain blue, feelings remain blue...that's all we slay!

Wednesday, December 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote it today as its the last day of 2014 (beingthoughtful) , when i look back my soul screams to know how people change!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nishi Kumari 31 December 2014

nice poem....it depicts a true scenario of today's life...

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Chinedu Dike 31 December 2014

A well articulated train of thoughts nicely encapsulated into a lovely poem. I like the diction as it captured the poet's conviction. Indeed love and ocean shall eternally remain blue. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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