Captain Cur

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Blue Sea Whales, portrait poems


Deep shadow forcing rippled surface wake;
defying gravity great blow ships sail,
leaping open water turn sideways break,
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  • Rookie - 58 Points Brian Jani (6/9/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    Well written captain cur (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (9/8/2012 3:31:00 AM)

    Hmm! The monolithic sea whales with mammoth strength and unnerving length splashing in the deep blue! ! Those behemoths are awesome and dreadful at the same time! Your first hand experience of having seen them (encountered? ?) gives ur description such force and vividness! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,037 Points Valerie Dohren (9/5/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    Whales are wonderful creatures, especially the Dolphin - love to swim with one, butI don't swim! ! Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (9/4/2012 8:07:00 PM)

    must be a fantastic sight to witness on the open sea, great write showing their majesty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (9/4/2012 7:02:00 PM)

    perhaps the real dominant species! (Report) Reply

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