Blueberry Picking Poem by Richard Provencher

Blueberry Picking

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August is a blue haze of
ripened fields,
hurried over by swarming pickers
this year of plenty. The Rakers eye
profits with stiffened backs,
juice-stained hands their colour
of success, bodies browned by the sun.
They scoop in delight, white
and blue buckets filled
to overflowing-

In my return to this land I can
smell the burning fields and
see their scorched October attire.
Once a breezy sea of blue
fertilized by bumblebees, now
picked clean from summer marauders.

See the fire, the scent of
tortured fields. Renewal is a
flaming serenade supervised
by accountants, anxious
for this cash crop to return
in bountiful supply.
In the shadow of another season
winter's frost chases about.

Monday, September 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: natural
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nova Scotia is a major exporter of blueberries. Although it requires hard work and business acumen, it can be a very lucrative business. Blueberry fields are everywhere and deserve to have a poem to salute them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 February 2015

Wow great fruit picking imagery and scenes poem with fine freeverse depictions in words. Interesting way u captured it all. So nice to read u again.

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July 3/17Thank you for kind words. To share ones' thoughts and feelings is such an adventure.

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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2014

A highly imaginative poem about the hard work and the joy during harvest of Blueberry farmers. A lovely piece. Thanks for sharing.

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July 3/17 Merci bien. I appreciate encouraging words. Writing has sustained me through my stroke in 1999 and my recuperation continues. Blueberries are so good for you. PS I have returned to this site with new poems.

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