Blurry Poem by Martine Kolber

Blurry

Rating: 5.0


Blurry wisdom
Scary sky

I scream
Fall out of the
Night

Into
Reality

Landing
Was hard
My body
Aches

My soul
Weeps

I must
Say
I’d rather
Take

My place
Within
The night
Again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 17 February 2010

wow so sweet this one too.we write the same way..loved it..short and intersting and meaningful..10/10

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Ken E Hall 29 July 2009

The poem has a modern feel about it and into reality can sometimes give you the shakes so.......get back into the night..love the poem+++++10 regards

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Marcella D 24 July 2009

better to use blurry then s.p.l.a.t

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 July 2009

well this is sort of different isnt it.. i sort of liked it too.., very short.. but you v expressed your self well. that s great talent.. nice.. with love shan

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