Body Parts Poem by Rachel Flint

Body Parts

Rating: 4.4


I probably should
hold my tongue
because its in danger
of falling out
of my head

I should stop
speaking my mind
I might have none left
if i carry on

I should stop
wearing my heart
on my sleeve
the blood stains
are getting hard
to wash out of my clothes

I should
but i wont!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 01 July 2008

Yeah I agreed with John... being true to oneself is the most remarkable thing a person can ever do! A 10.

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John Nightingale 31 December 2007

Rachel. Don't stop. Your determination shines through in this poem.

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