Bogged Down Poem by Ben Paterson

Found poem! Interesting how you were able to cull together this poem with such significant meaning. When I first read it, I was thinking how unique your word choices were yet how effective in conveying the meaning the theme. I also like the transitions between you and the 'group.' The last two lines are fantastic! I would love to hear more about how you put this together in your notes. And the title, aptly describing your poem, is it also 'found? ' Well done. Bravo!

Indeed, every mammal has it complexion, and to envisage life without difficulties is an existential absurdity. Life at very low ebb well depicted in the poem. A nicely encapsulated piece of poetry well penned. Thanks for sharing Ben.

Deep and written well. Thanks, Ben