Bon Voyage Verse Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Bon Voyage Verse
Whistles the train
Boring a hole
Into the midriff of the still air.
Bon voyages
Raised hands
Waving handkerchiefs
Pledges
Promises
Prayers for a safe return
Suns
Of kisses
Freezing on lips.
Unbetoken'd
Eyes moisten
With dew drops.
Whistels the train
Boring a hole
Into the midriff of the still air.
emotion..the scene..everything in a few lines...all of us pierce the air in our own strength
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4/23/2024 8:14:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like how the first stanza marries up with the fourth stanza. It has a fantastic flow and the second stanza has great alliteration and movement. 10 love Karin