Yasmeen Khan

Bonsai - Poem by Yasmeen Khan

Emerald verse
Bejeweled with
Rubies ablaze
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

When I saw a beautiful picture of a hibiscus bonsai

Comments about Bonsai by Yasmeen Khan

  • Yasmeen Khan (5/13/2013 8:04:00 AM)

    Thanks for comments and review. I will try to improve upon it. (Report) Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (5/13/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    lovely one but if i say one negative point of the piece that would be that the narration is lacking a kick or punch and that is too flat....... (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2013 7:29:00 AM)

    Just as the bonsai arrests our attention your poem is arresting and lovely, Jasmeen! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (5/9/2013 11:21:00 AM)

    This poem is a bonsai of your description! A beauty in miniature, a dwarf in stature and bejewelled with rubies ablaze! ! A truely great poem! ! Thank you for your sweet comment and your interpretation of my poem in all dimensions intended! ! (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (5/8/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    a concentrated piece...beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/8/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    every word chosen is shining, Rests on a sill, Kissed by sun//The work of artifice, That rests in a pot skilfully crafted with the meaning deep than (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (5/7/2013 11:13:00 PM)

    An exquisitely crafted poem. Do coment mine too. (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/7/2013 12:23:00 PM)

    lovely to read and easy on the tongue
    the short and sparse style adds a diminutive charm to the whole thing

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