Bonsai Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

The imagery here is very nice.

Ashraful, you have painted a minature of life so beautifully. It is spring here and my own bonsai are coming to their best with lovely new light green clothes, but none are as beautiful as yours. Bob

lovely majestic metaphors

love A4 blue sky through window. see The Ballad of Reading Gaol by Oscar Wilde for another poem about that little patch of blue sky. Best Wishes and Thank You

Hey thanks for your comment, thought I'd comment back. I really like this poem, its confusing and wonderful. At first if I'm honest, I hadn't a clue what was happening but I reread it and it clicked into place which is really cool. Its boring to have obvious poems right. I'd give it a 10.

I like the imagery in this one. Especially looking through the window into a night's sky!

Bonsai is a living image of endless dream i like the poem especialy this line. shan 10

Ashraful, You poetries paint some lines of thought with very few words and your enviable thought process...Again 10++...Brishti Mazumdar

a beautiful poem for a superb hobby...nay way of life bonsai is not something you just get up an do....it grows with you inside ur herat an thats why its so small an endearing beautiful; poemsir ill gladly give it ten and get some tips too cheers

beautiful expressions to a bonsai..a small but terrible..naizz