'Bout A Girl Poem by lil miss

'Bout A Girl

Rating: 5.0


if these walls could talk
they'd tell a tragic tale
'bout a girl who didn't know it yet
but she was destined to fail

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 24 May 2009

what sad prophesy, she has no idea what will hit her. but knowing what will later become of her might make her have a rethink of her life.

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Myrtle Thomas 06 April 2009

Yes I agree with Mel we learn from our mistakes and remember no one is perfect.You sure are good at poetry.I call this another 10 hold your head up and smile

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Regan Mackenzie 06 April 2009

I like this, short and strong...............

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 06 April 2009

well lil miss indeed we fail but we all need to fail in order to succeed. :) we all need to fall sometimes for us to learn how to stand up once again :) don't be ashamed of failing we all do that hehe keep ur head up u amazing: D God bless

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