Bob Blackwell (7/5/2008 8:42:00 AM)
Some Brain you gave him, well said well written I also like the rhyme. Stories like these need to be read but unfortunately not by those I read. Bob |
Viola Grey (6/30/2008 6:18:00 PM)
well...I'm gonna sound pretty old here, but if what we have these days is the future of the world...then we are screwed! ...I love your perception and the upfront way you serve your words...fantastic indeed. |
Greenwolfe 1962 (6/29/2008 12:34:00 PM)
I gave this poem a rare 10 because I wanted to make special notice of the
importance of rhythmic flow to a poem. I read so few poems which have it,
that when I see it; I feel a need to give it something special. So, I did here.
GW62 |
Tony Jolley (6/24/2008 3:38:00 AM)
How I wish I had written that one! Superb. Don't we all feel the same? As to the last couplet...; I could see the monkey evolving nicely, but the cretin is at an evolutionary dead end (and may it come soon) ! Tony |
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