Ruth Rayment

Rookie (19-01-88 / Greenwich)

Break Me Down - Poem by Ruth Rayment

Break me down
Into a smaller self
And allow me to see

The light of day
Will break me down
The seeds will begin to spread

But let life be a rejoice
For all that is left to be said
Break me down

And do not leave me
Alone to cry in fear
Of where I will be

Break me down
Do your best
I am not invisible

Therefore you can have a direct aim
And yes break me down
Place a piercing shot on me


I shant be defeated
For I believe
Something you will
Never begin to understand or conceive.


Comments about Break Me Down by Ruth Rayment

  • Gold Star - 5,767 Points Tiku . (6/25/2011 10:32:00 AM)

    ' break me down, do your best' is a nice stanza.straight from the heart it flows smooth.liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, June 27, 2011


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