Vincent Kuo

Rookie (04 April 1989)

Break of Dawn


The world sleeps, silent and still
Lost in the memories of the yester-night
With hopes and dreams in a frozen chill
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is an explicit description of the moments directly before and after sunrise. Related to each detail are the emotions and sentiments that course through me as I witness this daily miracle. I hope to convey the feeling of despair and hopelessness we all go through sometime in our lives. I'd like to encourage and motivate people through these difficult adversities and remember that in the darkest of midnights, yet will countless stars blossom. I hope you can relate in some way!

'It is always darkest just before the day dawneth'

If you enjoyed this poem, you are for sure going to enjoy my other poem 'Reawakening', written in more or less the same style with some similar underlying themes. However, 'Break of Dawn' can be seen as a more realistic parallel to 'Reawakening', in which I've incorporated some fantastical elements.

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  • Freshman - 1,782 Points Kevin Patrick (7/6/2012 1:40:00 PM)

    an exceptionally moving and heartfelt write rewarded by being wonderfully written and very moving (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (7/6/2012 10:22:00 AM)

    Absolutely! you really beautifully nailed those silent thoughts and emotions of the between hours of waiting and hoping for sumptuous settlement... your praise of dawn is just so how i experience it myself....the first whistle of a bird announcing dawn is a moment that never ceases to make my heart lift... congrats on your member of the day and i can totally understand why with this write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (7/6/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    nice one vincent, well written, as i work nights i get to see the dawn on a regular basis, makes you glad to be alive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mandi June (7/6/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    A truly beautiful and professional write. I love the transition from before to after, and how the poem incorporates emotion with such a natural event. Just an all-around, touching, and enjoyable poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (7/6/2012 4:44:00 AM)

    Well articulated, meticulous description of despair, hope
    then rejuvenation through observation and depth of thought.
    A brilliant piece of writing that needs to be read many times
    to be fully appreciated. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,513 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/6/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    The beauty is hidden in every stanza, when you try to explain every part of the dawn and the concurrent response of earth to the arrival of Sun light. Amazingly Superb.10 marks.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,053 Points Neela Nath (6/10/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    Meticulous details of your feeling is nicely presented The ray of the sun is the ray of hope..Marvelous! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Godfrey Morris (5/29/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    A beautifull poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Great description of the day's events. Please continue writing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,772 Points Valerie Dohren (5/28/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    Wow, beautiful Vince. Lovely description of the sun rising, with some deep thinking here too. (Report) Reply

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