Break Pen Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Break Pen

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Break pen

You made me quiet
After reading you as poet
No head and tail
As poet you have failed

No doubt, you are good hand
But how to read baseless end
You are thriving hard
But you end with no promising word

Why do you harp so much on lust?
Whereas it is indication of mistrust
You are hell bend on giving wrong picture
That shows no bright future

I shall vehemently condemn
And in turn consider no more future request
To read any article and term as best
This should be your crucial test

Kindly break down your pen
Or change style to present it as human
There is lot more to write
Including poverty to fight

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 November 2014

Break pen You made me quiet After reading you as poet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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