Break Up Poem by Njeri Bondagebreak

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Njeri Bondagebreak

Njeri Bondagebreak

Ngong, Kajiado, Rift Valley, Kenya.

Break Up

Rating: 4.8


(note: this was originally a song)

Dreams are often broken
And lives are often lost
But me losing you
Is like a fish right out of water

Hard as I tried to find you
I’m now having to let you go
For holding on is killing
The little life that’s left in me

And I’m just starting now to see
That we may never be
And holding on is harder
Than letting you go

I’m just starting now to see
That we may never be
And holding on is harder
Than letting you go
I’m waving both my arms but
I wish you’d reconsider

Because
You might come to find
That I died, Waiting on your love
Since I can’t make you stay
I’ll wait here till the day
I hear that you need me
And I’ll come running
Because

I’m just starting now to see
That we may never be
And holding on is harder
Than letting you go
Yes, I’m just starting now to see
That we may never be
And holding on is harder
Than letting you go

I’m just starting now to see
Starting now to see
Starting now to see
That I must let you go…..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bondage Break 16 September 2008

And Thanks Priyaa, for believing in me...It means a lot

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Bondage Break 16 September 2008

Marvin Brato, I don't know what gave you the Idea that I though Love is/was perfect... You must not understand my poem at all. What this poem is saying is that I'm letting someone that isn't happy go, because as much as I love this person, I'm not the one that makes them happy. But I want them to be happy so I let them go. Get it now?

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Marvin Brato 16 September 2008

Wake up from your dream and discern the reality that love is not perfect, but if is lost then surely another better will come your way.

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Ency Bearis 16 September 2008

a good poem..great write.. Ency Bearis

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Priya Arora 16 September 2008

Nice Poem Njeri..Keep on giving such good stuff to ur readers. With Regards, Priyaa Arora

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