Breaking Point Poem by Candika Niada

Breaking Point

Rating: 5.0


Disappointment, Heartache, Betrayal,
Pain, Anguish, and Torture.
These are what I feel
When I think of you.
My heart keeps breaking
With each hurtful remark,
Each hateful comment
You make.

I question your motives
Time and time again,
Wondering simply how this could be.
First new friends, trusting completely
Now old friends, with no trust at all.
I pity you.

With each arguement,
Every single fight,
My wall grows thicker.
My light grows dim.
You enevitibly will cause my demise.
I feel it in my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

Fragile and decaying coz of love went berserk? ? hey love is ups amd downs kinda thing, especially during the early stage.Nice writes Candika.

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