Breakthrough Poem by Leah Ayliffe

Breakthrough

Rating: 3.5


rain falling at my feet
swirling down a rusty drain
no need to run,
sick of the heat
the water pours down
releasing all strain

coffee brings mind light
eyes closed to a dream
unfocused on today
losing any strength to fight
no need for war
just have to change how i seem

lazy feet walk and stray
again under the rain
droplets from the sky
the freedom to lose the way
running feels right
no care to keep sane

faster and faster through it all
the pavement disappears below
run towards plush puddles
splash, fall and crawl
I know to laugh
laughing at my own show

the clouds thin out in the sky
the stars light up the land
soaked on the ground
i don't even think of why
or how i got to here
but now i choose to stand

the beauty overwhlems me
spread my arms to fly
in my mind
but so clearly i can see
in the air i breathe
to let it go with a sigh

Thursday, August 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 August 2009

Hi Leah, your words could hammer any hearts to a standstill.Nice writes.

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Annabel Sheila 14 August 2009

And as I finished readiing it, I exhaled a deep sigh! You've touched me with your words. The ability to make a stranger feel what you wrote is a gift my dear. Well done! ! Anna

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HaZeM PaKKaR 13 August 2009

i adore this piece.. especially this verse: ''' the beauty overwhlems me spread my arms to fly in my mind but so clearly i can see in the air i breathe to let it go with a sigh ''' so many times ive done the same.. thanks for sharing both of poetry & enjoying the beauty! !

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