Breathe Eternity Poem by Miss Fairytale

Breathe Eternity

Rating: 5.0


Breathe eternity over me,
With the essence of life
we soar through the heights
of spiritual existance.

Breathe your beliefs all over me,
With the silence of air
we entwine and combine
with contagious grace.

Breathe devotion all over me,
With natural beauty
we interlace clarity with mystery
like a dance of divinity.

Breathe your essence all over me,
With melodious wind
I'll breathe myself all over you
enchanting tranquility.


March 2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 28 November 2007

...and that is what this poems does...: 'interlace clarity with mystery' - - it doesn't matter if it is a spiritual force or two real people that are breathing on each other, your poem goes beyond that for me. You add to my definition of what a poem does: 'enterlace clarity with mystery.' Tom

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