Time is playing with me…it says you will never be back.
Everyone is showering sympathy on me…as though it is true.
Sky is laughing at me…when I looked at it for hug.
Cold breeze is teasing me…to adopt its nature.
Dark clouds are asking me…to rest in its shade.
Even while this pain is killing me…I am still breathing with smile.
In the beauty of those memories…that you gifted me.
rich and poetic way of saying....'bring me back where i begin to remember'.... the trueness of wonder of life with you my dear..... so strong that even the clouds of the night pour out water of tears.....thank you my friend...a 10 +++
''Even while this pain is killing me…I am still breathing with smile'' special wonderful poem, special wonderful poet..10+++ from me
nice one indeed..very refreshing one with great imagery..very visual and you v painted your emotions very well..thanks 10++
Good poem with good imagery. These thoughts in us have roots in our Telugu poetry. Please take a look at my poem 'Dont disturb' Almost similar in thought
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes! Whatsoever things are true, honest, just, pure, lovely, and of good report, think on these things... nice!