Vidi Pudinkz

Rookie - 20 Points (Jambi, Indonesia)

Brimless Tears - Poem by Vidi Pudinkz

Reach the tree till you get the leaves
Missing the way of going somewhere
Is that the sound of dropping tears
When all of a sudden go nowhere

Pain lasts in every moment of December
Bringing the frozen hopes in the Winter
Losing is the regretful pain all over
Spot which can not be erased forever

Why do the tears flow like a brimless river
When all of a sudden happen fast
Why are the tears felt like a torturing fever
When all of a sudden can not outlast

Why should the tears dropp like the pouring rain
When all of a sudden become thunder of every wish
Why must the tears be frozen like the snowing rain
When all of a sudden break the love of endless wish

Comments about Brimless Tears by Vidi Pudinkz

  • Silver Star - 4,128 Points Dave Walker (2/1/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    A really great poem, really like it.
    A great write.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    Evil Rising. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 1, 2012

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