Bringing Back Memories Of... .....[humor; Eating; Very Short; For Jak Black, Ph Friend] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bringing Back Memories Of... .....[humor; Eating; Very Short; For Jak Black, Ph Friend]

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When at my mirrored-belly I look,
I remember what my wife does cook.
Or should I have said “does bake”?
Like each pie, croissant, and cake!

I used to be a slim, handsome guy,
but the “slim” part gave in ….to pie.
I’m still quite handsome. Goodness sake.
Pass me another slice ………of that cake!


(March 20, 2015)

Friday, March 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: food
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my PH friend, Jak Black, an obvious pseudonym if i ever heard one, challenged me to write about what would bring a memory back to me. what else would i rather remember?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 24 March 2015

What could be better than fresh pie or cake. I would rather remember those good old days of my home made goodies!

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Jak Black 22 March 2015

You're not eating enough of that humble pie, you handsome chap. Thanks for taking up the challenge. Ha ha. Was expecting something a little more sensitive/sentimental than your hankering for food. That's love I suppose. Enjoyed the humour Bri.

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