? Broken? Poem by Davion Krustov

? Broken?

Rating: 4.5


Siting on the side walk
Illuminated by street lights
With kids throwing rocks
At someone hurt
The blood is flowing
From the heart
And wishes that someone knowing
Would come along
And save the day
But alone he breaks
Thoughtless and confused
Is he here to stay
Or is this were he shall forever lay?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley Hall 24 June 2009

It kinda makes me want to cry because it's so well worded. And it's something i've seen or felt before the feeling it contributes. Very nice.

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Suicidal Magic 24 June 2009

very nicely written... keep up the good work!

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London :) 24 June 2009

well said. you should take a look at my poems. if you want. :)

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Davion Krustov

Davion Krustov

Boulder, Colorado
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