Broken Poem by Doom & Gloom
Broken
There was a time when I was whole, in body, mind, heart & soul
When I was flawless without seam, a fairy tale a perfect dream
A single piece with no divide, with faith, hope & love inside
Complete, entire & intact. All I need, nothing lacked
Then I met you
Now I find that I am shattered, broken bruised and badly battered
Cut asunder callously, by your fair hand so savagely
Smashed and torn totality ceases
Left abandoned in a million pieces
wow, writing like a teenager first broken heart experience.
Amazing, it all flows together, makeing the perfect mind image.
WELL WRITTEN... YOU MADE ME RELIVE WHAT ONCE WAS, BUT THIS TIME AROUND I LAUGHED INSTEAD OF CRY; -)
Ouch! I know this feeling well DG! I hope you find solace in the muse at least, I did and do. Smiling at you, Tai Aciiiiids friend
Wow! Indeed the pain inflicted by another is a deep one. Very good write.
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 10:23:47 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very powerfull. I like the way you use words in this poem.