Broken Poem by Carl Carl

Broken

Rating: 5.0


I once was beautiful
I was an angel
I loved all
Everytime

I was cheated by Lucifer
I became a broken angel
I was forced to prey on helpless people
Everyone

I was attacked
I was killed
I feel betrayed
Everything

I fell form heaven
I fell down to earth
I walk among them
I walk till the end of days

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlet Thomas 13 March 2012

I really like this one.

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.

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Dave Walker 08 March 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Lucid Dreams.

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