Broken Poem by Leonard Lee

Broken

Rating: 3.5


Finally i know whats wrong! !
nothing in common for soo long...
how can i be soo blind to it...
all the disinterest-ness seems to fit...
for so long i've been like a child...
when i don't get your attention i go wild...

All it took was for a simple hint...
or is it? !

Or have you lose your patience with me...
this your own way to set my heart free?
now i know and it hurts like hell...
all this while i've been kept in a shell...
a shell of my own lies...
a love i thought will never die...

But why! but why it took soo long? !
it hurts to know i'm soo wrong...

At least you've said what you want...
i'm greatful though that you weren't that blunt...
oh you've always been a nice person...

But now i know, now i know...
it really hurts me so...

i love you to the bottom of my heart...
how could you just tore me apart...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lulu Muffin 13 August 2005

i can understand where you're coming from. things like that completely hurt, it made me teery eyed to read something that i understand completely.

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Anong All 30 June 2005

your poem sounds sad, in a way...

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