'Broken Dreams' Poem by junior frontilus

'Broken Dreams'



Just as my child brings his broken toys
with tears for me to mend,
I took my broken dreams to God
because He was my friend.
But then instead of leaving Him
in peace to work alone,
I hung around and tried to help
with ways that were my hown.
at last I snatched them back and cried,
'How could you be so slow'
'What could i do, my child, ' He said,
'You never did let go'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ms 18 September 2022

I remember this poem from many years ago it is called 'Broken dreams' although it has been slightly changed

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Maya Reid 20 November 2008

I'm not a religious person, but I love this poem and the message it sends anyway. I am impressed.

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Ryan Thompson 03 November 2008

oh this is nice and made me smile :)

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Make A Wish 24 October 2008

very good. i never knew you could write! lol i dont even know you: P

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Serenity Prayer 23 October 2008

amazing job. im speachless.

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