Broken Dreams Poem by TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL

Broken Dreams

Rating: 5.0


As I lay me down in afield of broken dreams and I pray to the Lord above my soul to keep. if I die before I wake then I pray to the Lord my soul to take. Well my journey here is almost over been down too many roads that lead nowhere. The Light at the end of the Tunnel always seems to fade to black sure as hell can't go forward sure as hell can't go back. As I lay me down in a field of broken dreams, as I lay me down in afield of broken dreams. Well I'm tired of being here without you tired of this pain that is always in my chest. Just want to be with you so my soul can finally rest.as I lay me down in a field of broken dreams, as I lay me down in a field of broken dreams. Well I hope that the lord will forgive me bring me comfort in all of my despair. Take these broken dreams and lift me up to where you are with the angels in the air.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written after the death of my wife Patricia Ann I really wanting to leave this World.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Baker 22 August 2017

This has made me cry a lot.. I weep for your loss. You have written with such Love and a prayer to The Lord.. I hope your heart is mended love can enter your heart.. I have prayed The Lord give you comfort and much deeper prayers.... let it be so... Beautiful. thank you for sharing....johannax

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 16 August 2015

Great lines. I like them. Sad but very touching. The poem made me think about some important issues in my life. And it seems to be a song more than a verse, doesn`t it) ? Anyway, good panning. Thank you for sharing.

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Roseann Shawiak 19 July 2015

Very touching and heart wrenching poem, I felt your sadness all the way through it. My son says it sounds like a song by Dream Theater from 1979. Very good write. RoseAnn

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