Broken Heart Poem by angel of passion 016

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


it hurts so bad
im so sad
i was falling hard
no words can describe it not even a card

my heart is breaking
i wish i was faking
im going breathless
i cant even rest

i was falling in love for the first
my life is now a curse
my mind is soaken
im heart broken

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

Love is a funny game, Angel...it often brings such disturbing pains in the middle... good write...the emotions and pain eloquently expressed in short lovely lines...10

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Jacqueline Jacoby 07 January 2009

Nice poem! Yeah i understand what ur heart is feeling....message me we can talk if u want 2.....................Jackie

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Joseph Poewhit 07 January 2009

One day a person turns the corner - wamo love

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