Meriam Joseph

Freshman - 775 Points (30/08/1999 / Kerala, India)

Broken Heart Pieces - Poem by Meriam Joseph

Broken heart pieces scattered everywhere
Like a rose petal floating in mid air.
Where can I find them? , In the present or in a fair?
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Topic(s) of this poem: sad, saddened

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poem is about how people can be quite heart hearted towards someone or something that is important to them. There is no limit to how much people can push others down to get them where they want to go.

Comments about Broken Heart Pieces by Meriam Joseph

  • Cyclopseven R (12/9/2015 6:14:00 AM)

    Brilliant and motivational. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/17/2015 3:08:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem. You show a deep empathy for your fellow man and their heartaches. Great poem. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    Broken Heart Pieces expresses a deep understanding of pain and suffering among humans no matter what age or state of life. Only Heaven can cure a broken heart. Nothing on earth can change the fact that if we live and love we will suffer broken heartness. This poet has a very promising future as a writer. For 11 yrs of age, she has a wonderful insight into human suffering. Dealing with the heart is a very difficult. She realizes that heart break is everywhere no matter the day, time, century or person. A worthy read. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2011 6:40:00 AM)

    Can't believe a 12 year ols girl can write like this (Report) Reply

  • Karthik Rajagopal (12/28/2011 12:23:00 PM)

    sweet poem meriam.. really impressive.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/28/2011 5:48:00 AM)

    grrrrtttt poem, meriam...
    it's so gud to know dat a grl of 12 yrs has dis much talent
    n dat too a malayali!
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  • (12/26/2011 6:14:00 AM)

    Brilliant theme. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2011 8:59:00 PM)

    Excellent. A different approach, end is very nice. Appreciating your imagination. (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2011 12:19:00 PM)

    since love is universal, , , , :) (Report) Reply

  • Renu Kakkar (11/22/2011 8:34:00 AM)

    good poem, well made, some sentences can be shortened though......even i liked the ending (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (11/22/2011 5:47:00 AM)

    Meriam, it's a great poem! And good advice at the end... Look up to heaven, where else would our help come from? (Report) Reply

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