Meriam Joseph

Rookie - 411 Points (30/08/1999 / Kerala, India)

Broken Heart Pieces - Poem by Meriam Joseph

Broken heart pieces scattered everywhere
Like a rose petal floating in mid air.
Where can I find them? , In the present or in a fair?
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Comments about Broken Heart Pieces by Meriam Joseph

  • Rookie - 96 Points Austin Lockwood (6/17/2015 3:08:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem. You show a deep empathy for your fellow man and their heartaches. Great poem. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Carlotta Russell (1/4/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    Broken Heart Pieces expresses a deep understanding of pain and suffering among humans no matter what age or state of life. Only Heaven can cure a broken heart. Nothing on earth can change the fact that if we live and love we will suffer broken heartness. This poet has a very promising future as a writer. For 11 yrs of age, she has a wonderful insight into human suffering. Dealing with the heart is a very difficult. She realizes that heart break is everywhere no matter the day, time, century or person. A worthy read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stella Mary (12/30/2011 6:40:00 AM)

    Can't believe a 12 year ols girl can write like this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karthik Rajagopal (12/28/2011 12:23:00 PM)

    sweet poem meriam.. really impressive.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Neetha Sasidharan (12/28/2011 5:48:00 AM)

    grrrrtttt poem, meriam...
    it's so gud to know dat a grl of 12 yrs has dis much talent
    n dat too a malayali
    ...wow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vishnudev Murikkanattil (12/26/2011 6:14:00 AM)

    Brilliant theme. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sajini G (12/14/2011 8:59:00 PM)

    Excellent. A different approach, end is very nice. Appreciating your imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gita S R (11/22/2011 12:19:00 PM)

    since love is universal, , , , :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Renu Kakkar (11/22/2011 8:34:00 AM)

    good poem, well made, some sentences can be shortened though......even i liked the ending (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (11/22/2011 5:47:00 AM)

    Meriam, it's a great poem! And good advice at the end... Look up to heaven, where else would our help come from? (Report) Reply








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