Hazel Durham

Broken Pieces - Poem by Hazel Durham

Rainy grey days, appears like the sky is falling down,
All around the mystical splendour of Killeen Castle,
Horses grazing on it's fine fertile pastures,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is about an estate callled Killeen Castle, that my partner and I lived in the gate lodge there for a few years. Unfortunately our relationship was doomed by a clash of our personalities! !

Comments about Broken Pieces by Hazel Durham

  • Elisabeth Wingle Elisabeth Wingle (11/10/2015 3:03:00 PM)

    The only foes were ourselves. I love that line. I think most of us have had lost love in our lives
    Sometime we can't quite understand what happened. Sometime I think we are not supposed to. Lovely poem (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (3/14/2015 8:49:00 PM)

    No time to dance, our chance of a dream life gone,
    The song, was an elusive combination of love and hate,
    Too late, my persona shattered into tiny broken pieces,
    That was my fate.
    It's beauty of words and thoughts..................10 (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 10:32:00 PM)

    these lines are filled with passion, love, pain and vivid imagery...............wonderful write Hazel........ (Report) Reply

  • Mike Barrett Mike Barrett (1/3/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    A beautiful write.....so long as the joys of life outnumber the pain, so long as pain teaches us something, we've lost nothing and gained much - compassion and empathy are two of pain's gifts! I truly enjoy your work! (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    Excellent poem...Each lines are so well written. Loved reading it.. Beautiful poem.

    I seek your Blessings on my completion of 100 poems..Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Marcus Mckinley Marcus Mckinley (7/2/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    love and admiration are a cold commodity among these castle walls when the heart tolls silently. nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (5/22/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    excellent poetry, no need to say more or i am speechless to to utter any words.! .. however enjoyed fully.. (Report) Reply

  • Sandy Player Sandy Player (12/24/2012 4:01:00 PM)

    It's painful to see the inevitable coming early in the poem and then it being obvious and unavoidable at the ending. At the very least though, you got a good poem out of it. (Report) Reply

  • Sandy Player Sandy Player (12/24/2012 4:00:00 PM)

    It's painful to see the inevitable coming early in the poem and then it being obvious and unavoidable at the ending. At the very least though, you got a good poem out of it. (Report) Reply

  • Matt Mooney Matt Mooney (12/11/2012 4:42:00 PM)

    Glad to have found your poems.10. (Report) Reply

  • Abaka Blessing Anastasia Abaka Blessing Anastasia (12/11/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    A sad ending rhyme. i wish u guys can be together. lines filled with passion. nice 1 (Report) Reply

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (12/10/2012 2:19:00 PM)

    You are an amazing writer! The way your words dance on the page painting pictures in my mind! How alluring.
    Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Wulan Permata Puri Wulan Permata Puri (12/9/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    All in one
    Sad Beautiful Poems (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran Nasarudheen Parameswaran (12/4/2012 10:55:00 AM)

    A hot tear on the mundane life.Nice (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (12/1/2012 6:05:00 AM)

    You are amzing to be sharing your notes. I hope that there is now pure sunlight in your life. So well written Hazel (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb Jahan Zeb (11/30/2012 8:21:00 AM)

    The intensity in the poem reveals the feelings the poetess had at the time of writing it. Very deep and touching Hazel. Marvelous wording and the imagery is of high qualities. Well done Hazel. (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen Musfiq Us Shaleheen (11/29/2012 9:05:00 PM)

    Well imagery and sad poem but you draw several images here. (Report) Reply

  • Owain Glyn (11/29/2012 1:54:00 PM)

    Celt versus Celt, maybe the outcome was predetermined. Well expressed I shall try some of your other work. Thankyou. (Report) Reply

  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (11/29/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    What a summit of poetic expressions! These broken pieces have made this piece a real literary gem of the kind. Nostalgic and lost in sweet reminiscences you have really re assembled a thing of beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib Asif Andalib (11/28/2012 10:55:00 PM)

    Lovely picturesque and expression of deepest feelings. A sad but beautiful write (Report) Reply

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