Broken Song Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Broken Song

Rating: 5.0


When I close my eyes
She smiles with her eyes
Her soft tone pats me
And I hear those words
Which she never told me

When I open my eyes
Tears rundown my cheeks
To wet my beating heart
With salt to dilate pain
To breakdown my heart

My heart dried it all
In shelter of dark pal
Staying alone in four walls
In memories of her calls
Which I always recall

She left behind a mark
It’s a painful remark
It makes my dreams dark
With its sleepless nights
I stay awake for long

She moved away too long
To hear my broken song
So I walked on path long
To sing my broken song
To touch many distance long

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 29 June 2009

broken song a real melancholy a solitude ......... best write...........

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it should disappear..this sad melancholy...may be she din't deserve you...love hurts

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Janell Cressman 29 June 2009

I totally thing that the pain will slowly go away, very well written poem! ! ! ! !

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Surya . 30 June 2009

how sad! looks very natural. you have a style man a 10+++ from me surya

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premji premji 30 June 2009

pain pain..in every line.........

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

Poem portrays a reality of life - pain.

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Indira Renganathan 27 July 2009

I guess this is not your personal love...just an imagery....with touching sorrow...a sad poem indeed

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

sad and almost spoken in a hushed pain very tender...i wonder what inspired this piece nice poetry cheers

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Louis Rams 30 June 2009

a heart in pain can never be the same

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

I liked the way you wrote this poem well written

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