Brother Poem by Jessica Caswell

Brother



why would he say
what he said today
hes lying
and crying
to get his way
if only you could trust me
if only you could see
the truth is with me
he says im wrong,
but I dissagree
when he says I'm right
then they trust me
but that hardly happens
so he says;
she started the fight
I know we argue
and I know we tease
but your my younger brother
and listen to me please
I will always love you
forever
and until the end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dans Only 24 May 2009

Nice write. Easily read. I like the rhyme and that it really didn't follow a rhyme scheme. I could also relate with the topic. Good job. Thanks.

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Very because i do not have a brother but i have a sister older than me but we always argue and disagree with each other.Very beautiful poem.

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