Brother Lost Poem by Amanda Ford

Brother Lost

Rating: 3.2


my brother he is lost to me,
grew up and he out grew me.

moved away to hide from dad,
left me all alone and sad.

now he's forced to live a lie,
scared away by one big cry.

he wrecked the car so dad wrecked him,
kicked him out and forced hate in.

he's run away many times before,
but now he's allowed in no more.

pretend like and fake love,
my dad is now so filled of.

they can be together for just mere minutes,
then the fight begins before us.

hide the pain, we try to do,
but once again it just breaks through.

way to young to be on his own,
but he's still left alone.

now all i have left to say,
is i hope to see him free one day.

free of pain, and free to hope,
and free for him and his love to elope.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bravo Amanda....you are a lovely sister and this poem depicts that...Wish you and your bro all the happiness...

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Shekhar Joshi 18 April 2009

love and pain for your brother are expressed wonderfully here. i liked the rhythm i love my brother too another AMAZING poem great work

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Stephanie Saba 29 December 2008

it's a nice poem.: ] I wish him well.

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