Browsing Through Poem by Fay Slimm

Browsing Through

Rating: 5.0


Into the middle of deepest word-seas,
She, at times, plunges..........
To swim with his soul.

Awash in heartfelts,
She floats........................
Happily.

Drinking in eloquence,
Then dives...............
Boldly.

Sinking to bottomless poetic rhyme,
She finds relief...............
From thirst.

Browsing through,
She feeds from green
Fronds....................
Of love- time.

Unrehearsed.........
Romantic........
Devoted............
Truths.

Convinced by verses,
She smiles,
Rises again.............
Feeling loved
.
To better bear
Love's sweet pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Stirk 19 July 2009

Lovely and unique imagery. You dive well below the surface to find such wonder. Best Steve

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Bob Gibson 18 July 2009

Immersed in the sea of love, gentle and passionate waves bathed in the calm, yet sometimes turbulent waters nerve endings tingling with excitement, then the pure totally relaxed sensation of togetherness Phew! its hot in here! would someone puleeees open that door!

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

This style flows well Fay, I adored each stanza that you have expertly penned here.....excellent piece my friend.....I'd like to see you write more in this form 10++

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Catrina Heart 18 July 2009

Browsing through..... to better bear the love's sweet pain. WOW! ! ! Awesome poem..different in style yet so heartfelt...10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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