Bruning Love Till Eternity Poem by Bonnie Collins

Bruning Love Till Eternity

Rating: 5.0


Journey of love is what we have
given to one another, a journey
with only a one way ticket fare

Endlesly hopelessly, and foolishly
we both took this enchanting ride

Livng for one moment's bliss, one
moments pleasure, the price we paid
we each now have to relinguish

Licking old wounds, that never really
heal from the raging fire of its very soul

These are at best only a decription in part
of our ever burning love till enternity...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lillian J. 09 February 2008

this is very nice to read, enjoyed. lilly :)

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Ana Zaldivar 05 February 2009

Lovely Bonnie... I'm just speechless.. your writtings are so full of emotions, specialy love... Love, bonnie, you reflect so much love to the ones around you, and your poems too... they have the personality of it's author... Love, Ana

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Robert Sheridan 20 September 2008

Bonnie, An 'enchanting' write that motivates the senses and as always, you have delivered it in your own unique style, , , take a bow, no, take two bows! ! Blessings, Robert

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

Ammmmazing expression! ..........10

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Tracker Ogryphon 22 February 2008

a history of romance always makes for a great poem.

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Craig Anderson 19 February 2008

' Journey of love is what we have given to one another, a journey with only a one way ticket fare ' Beautiful piece. Enjoyed it Bon. Craig.

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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