Brutus Poem by Sathya Narayana

Brutus

Rating: 5.0


At him, you are heaving your stick
But shouting ‘ahas’ and ‘ohos’ with throes
I thought “this man is a hoax”
But you’re as honorable as Brutus
I found the other end of that long baton, alas
Right in between your two legs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 05 October 2009

excellent philosophical poem and abstract reasoning process, lovely to read.....10++++++++++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 October 2009

we do have loads and loads of them...they think we are fools..they think we do not see beyond their smiling faces..a satire write.10

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Kesav Easwaran 08 October 2009

you have a clever point there to drive home...and you do it cleverly in a modern Mark Antony style...10

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Seema Chowdhury 08 October 2009

a nice, short and meaningful poem. thanks for sharing.

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 October 2009

Hey, I found this poem rather amusing sir.. I mean it is kinda satire isn't it? ? ? You are good at writing such poems.. Short, but worthwhile read! ! 10 Regards Shan

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 30 November 2009

As Caesar loved me, I weep for him; As he was fortunate, I rejoice at it; As he was valiant, I honour him, but As he was ambitious, I slew him.. While reading your poem the above justify speech, dashing in my memories..nice comes up in my mind

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 October 2009

interesting.. makes me remember my high school life those lines I recited in front of the class my fave The Defense of Brutus... great one, Sir short but tough one...unforgettable 10+++++ Lovelots Maia

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 October 2009

interesting.. makes me remember my high school life those lines I recited in front of the class my fave The Defense of Brutus... great one, Sir 10+++++ Lovelots Maia

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 14 October 2009

BEAUTY IN BREVITY... ;)

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 October 2009

sir...one of the most enjoyable poems i've ever read...really a great read...10

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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