Builds Slowly Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Builds Slowly

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Builds slowly

Tears
Always bear
Painful value
Not for others view

Rich or poor
Or for that matter
Even neighbors
No one is spared

It builds heavily inside
But puts aside
The tremendous flow
For the world to show

It kills mercilessly with fear
That it should not fall as tear
No one should notice also
Like river it must calmly go

It makes strong person to cry
Knock the head at wall and try
The pain, inside heart, is unbearable
It builds slowly to become incurable

Builds Slowly
Tuesday, November 17, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2015

welcome Angelica Datahan, Shyla Dominic and Nella Loagnod like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 18 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2015

welcome Scott Ransopher,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2015

welcome Scott Ransopher,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2015

welcome Megha Shukla, Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2015

It makes strong person to cry Knock the head at wall and try The pain, inside heart, is unbearable It builds slowly to become incurable

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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