Lucifera Santez

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Bunch Of Roses - Poem by Lucifera Santez

I walk along his grave,
the same obsidian headstone
gleaming in sun
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

in the memory of Edward Derwent, a way too painful memory which I wish would go to grave easily..................

Comments about Bunch Of Roses by Lucifera Santez

  • (12/4/2013 6:10:00 AM)


    As time goes by the sadness is always waiting for those flowers but the memories live on, tactfully written..regards (Report) Reply

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  • (11/27/2013 10:46:00 AM)


    This poem caught me unawares. I was expecting a flowery poem but found a powerful but subdued testimony of bereavement. Evocative and well written. (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2013 4:20:00 AM)


    Very expressive poem and penned in a superb way.. (Report) Reply

  • Nikita Dutt (8/6/2013 5:26:00 AM)


    Lucifera reading it i can feel the abject misery behind the words. This is what life is about, you start something to remember someone and then it becomes a ritual very well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/29/2013 2:40:00 PM)


    very touching dear Lucifera. I have had the same experience. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/29/2013 11:17:00 AM)


    sad but beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2013 10:30:00 AM)


    I can catch a deep sadness behind your words
    you penned very well
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  • (7/25/2013 10:56:00 PM)


    I don't really read poets bios but indulge in their work and that's how I real get to know them, to know how they see things and learn from their wisdom..

    Well penned sad poem, even though the reason is unknown to us but the poem is great.
    Siya_! !
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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/24/2013 5:04:00 PM)


    years long habit
    rather than respect
    and then,
    i walk away....................
    Just couldn't grasp the reason. Your biography is also a bit too sketchy. A little more elaboration, a little note, perhaps?
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  • Lyn Paul (7/24/2013 8:31:00 AM)


    A thought provoking write, I do not know this history but your sadness is penned well. Thank you (Report) Reply








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