Buried Poem by Sandra Martyres

Buried

Rating: 5.0


She carefully arranged the
last remains of
her poetic ambitions
while he helped to drive
the last nail into the coffin
with his sharp tongue
drill bit
No one attended
the funeral
She was out there alone
There were no tears
except perhaps her own
She carefully lowered what
she considered to be
her works of art
into the earth
for all time to come
hoping desperately that
the creatures of the ground
would feast on the paper
leaving no traces behind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 August 2009

poems are born children..a fate they get from god...a very deep write friend..please take back your words

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Sonya Florentino 15 August 2009

OMG Sandra...this is as dark as it gets.. a poets death! ...but shouldn't poems live forever? or maybe not... but at least the good ones!

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

This is one of my favorite styles of poems. The characters are so somberly carrying out their (last) duties and it is all so serious..Nothing is as delicious to me as this type of plot. You carried it off with swashbuckling style! Hope some of the poems do survive, though..

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Subroto Chatterjee 18 August 2009

I hope the soft copies of the poems survive.....! ! Whats all this about burying poems? ? Symbolic destruction of....? ? Cheers. Subroto

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Mamta Agarwal 20 August 2009

buried in these lines is a story untold, only implied. very powerful write Sandra. that's what good poetry is about. however, tangible things can be buried, the spirit is above such rituals... 10 Mamta

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Patti Masterman 30 August 2009

I was sure that I had commented upon this one before but there is no other comment. But this is one of my favorite poems, and it's got killer originality in every pore.

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Vijay Menon 29 August 2009

what to say a nice poem with sad words 10+++

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Indira Babbellapati 28 August 2009

this reminds me of 'trapped contours' i posted long long ago...

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Blue Eyes 27 August 2009

truely wonderful.i love this kind of poems ''that have meaning'' keep it up.

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Sandra Fowler 23 August 2009

This poem glitters in the darkness of its own stanzas.It is powerful, evocative and exceptionally poignant. I advise this gifted poet to write on.10/10. Love, Sandra

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