Buried By Haiku Poem by Mary Nagy

Buried By Haiku



I'm here
amongst the huge pile of haiku.
Can you see me?
I hope you do.

I've been buried here
and I don't know what to do.
Each time I post a poem..
it gets buried by haiku! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kenneth william snow 25 March 2005

I see you Mary! This is beautiful, it made me laugh...nice rhymes. The secret is to wait until John logs out and then post your poem. Good Luck! Kenneth

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Michael Shepherd 25 March 2005

A Japanese haiku found in a Chinese wish-cracker: Poem Read Silence

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Ivy Christou 06 April 2005

i just love this poem, lol! it is soo true! HBH

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Chuck Audette 08 April 2005

Thanks for the smile! -chuck

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Richard A. Davis SR. 26 April 2005

First of all, ty for your comments on my poem for my sons, being a parent you know how I feel. Secondly, I so love this poem.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

A short and very enjoyable haiku! Very cute!

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Brian Dorn 15 June 2006

Funny stuff, Mary! With so many personal and serious pieces, it's nice to catch a glimpse of your humor! ! Brian

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MARY...SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK WHERE YOU ROCK SO WELL HAIKU IS THE SIMPLEST LOOKING VERSE FORM THAT REQUIRES THE MOST COMPLEX OF IMAGE CONCEPT, AS A PITCTORIAL STORY UNIQUELY UNFOLDS IN 17 SYLLABLES....YOUR WORK IS ESPECIALLY UNIQUE AS IT IS A HAIKU ON ITSELF...A DIAMOND CHIP EXAMPLE OF CONTEMPORARY FORM....QUITE CLEVER INDEED, MARY''''''''''''''FRANK

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Alessandra Liverani 06 February 2006

I dug your verse out Shovelled away all the soil And enjoyed your wit

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Duncan Wyllie 01 February 2006

Ah yes, but message always comes across loud and near. Love Duncan

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