Burns Poem by Tofur Damico

Burns

Rating: 4.8


The sun
burns bright
its burning
me
slowly
like an ant
under an evil childs
magnifying glass
it feels too
hard to 'live
life has no
meaning anymore
while I squirm
around and try to get
out
of what is
happening, but
the light
it shines
so bright
it almost blinds
me
I cant see
where Im
going
I go
in circles
until, slowly,
the sun
takes my
soul
away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Lloyd 14 November 2005

Like this a lot, Tofur. very sad, though. Hope life is treating you ok now... Jon.

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Mary Nagy 07 November 2005

Very good poem Tofur. Sincerely, Mary

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Lylyanna Pilewski 07 November 2005

nice like it write more Lylyanna

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