Mindless violence in a mindless world! The search for meaning and for humanity in your poems is compelling. Your writing has power. When I read one of your poems I feel drawn to read the next. Thank you for introducing me to them.
I wanted to rate this art but you had no rate section Still this is a lovely story Harsh and meaningless violence detailed Try to not be so directly in the story and convey your input or feeling to these events Click my name to see how I express things in one of my poems
I like the idea of this poem and the sudden darker shift midpoint. Though there is something about the ending that personally I feel needed a change...maybe a symbolic metaphor. Good poetry.
oh brother...i remember this brutal murder...which made everyone shocked for a while.....
you wrote it very well...
Let us all pray for the noble soul
To rest in peace
yes we should pray, not only for that teacher but also for that child.......