Busy Bee Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Busy Bee Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Nature's oldest dance
enticing delphinium
bee collects nectar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karla Bardanza 17 November 2008

Nice haiku! Kisses and hugs Karla Bardanza

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 November 2008

Beautiful haiku indeed. Great imagery. Romantic.

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very nice haiku...10

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 August 2011

And the poet captured them in the honeydew smooth words.Well penned.

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Ben Gieske 12 June 2009

The dancing of bees has always fascinated me. 'enticing delphinium' is a surprise purpose for the bee's dancing for me.

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Yelena M. 25 March 2009

10+ for the phrase 'enticing delphinium'.A perfect haiku for the Kingdom of nature, in my opinion. Best wishes. A.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 24 November 2008

beautiful imagery of the nectar collecting bees... :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 November 2008

Ammmmmmazing imagery! ......10+

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